Okay, I'm sorry Feeblemind, that is my fault.
I should have been more specific. I actually meant for the template/layout to be looked at, not the content. This is my first attempt at working with a graphics program, and attempting to apply it to web graphics. I wanted to make a new web design theme that looked like one of my favorite hobbies. Furthermore, how do I go about posting a link that doesn't look like an advertisement, because I assure you that wasn't my intention on the first post. I was just excited because I thought it looked cool, and wanted to see what everyone else thought. Thanks to everyone that has given feedback so far, but I only need people to check out the layout so I have an idea of how I'm doing so far. I figured if I wanted to see if the layout looked like skydiving, I should have skydivers look at it.
Sorry for the misunderstanding.