Constructive criticism on video appreciated please

[Newbie 0]

Made this 10 min vid with a couple of mates this month. Would like some feedback if you guys get a chance. Made a few vids but always looking for feedback on stuff to improve for next time.

It's 100+ meg but we tried to keep the quality higher. Enjoy and thanks.

http://www.skydivingmovies.com/ver2/pafiledb.php?action=file&id=4347

"Skydiving is a door"
Happythoughts

[PhreeZone 20]

With out even looking at it if its 10 minutes long it might be better to break it up into smaller seperate segments unless it has a story that needs that long to be told. Thats something I am working on now.

Even on broadband 100 megs still takes a while to download, smaller size offerings or at least a preview to make sure its worth the time to download it are always appreciated.

Yesterday is history
And tomorrow is a mystery

Parachutemanuals.com

[MB38 0]

I watched the first half or so and was enjoying it. I'll finish it up later.

Strangely, I like long videos. My biggest recommendation would be to deinterlace the footage before compressing it. Compressed interlacing makes the footage look worse than it otherwise would.

I really don't know what I'm talking about.

[bak_peter 0]

I found the tracking scene in the beginning of the vid to long. It took over 3 minuttes (from the beginning of the vid) before the tracking scene was over.

I also found the scene after the low hook turn to long. You just stand around talking. If you wasn't there when it happened, it gets a little bit boring.

If you cut a little bit in the length of the scenes (mentioned above) and some other scenes you can boil it down to a 5-6 minuttes vid, and the vid would still be very good.

In general I liked the vid, it included som cool flying and some good videofotage