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StevePhelps

DZ poster -- any thoughts

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Cool poster, but I'd agree that a canopy pic would be good. Also, the exit pic in the top left is good, but I think it needs cropping a little tighter to put more emphasis on the faces of the student and instructor.

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People are smart but from a quick glance I don't know if people will understand the feel your going for with the shot that has the wing. I would find one where its maybe a little farther and you can see more of the plane.

We can recognize instantly that it is the underside of a wing but I don't know if wuffos will catch that as they walk by a poster on the wall. It might not matter if they get it, but I think that the point your trying to make will be more clear if you choose a shot that is both close to the main subject and still indicative of the plane inthe background.

It seems that the subject of that area of the post ought to be more of the "what your doing" than the "who is doing it" I think that the expression of someone just exiting is cool too but the orientation of the picture doens't make it stand out to me.


p.s. I like the way you used the backgrounds as more of a landscape and allowed the pictures to sort of pour out from the "window" of the ground below. Though i might chop the leg of the reserve side (white) JM because it would give more depth and wouldn't be overdoing the effect. He does appear to be much farther back.
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Yeah, I've got some thoughts, Steve....>:(

Now I can handle Katiebear having the same color pattern on her BirdMan suit as I do because, well, she's Katie and she's my :ph34r:.

But is there really someone in OK with the same colors as moi? Damn....that's freaky.:ph34r: I need to get my booty out to Airtight and check that place out.

As for the overall poster, damn nice.:)
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People are smart but from a quick glance I don't know if people will understand the feel your going for with the shot that has the wing. I would find one where its maybe a little farther and you can see more of the plane.



I had one like that up -- but consenus @ the DZ and on this forum was we liked seeing the face on exit better. Thanks for your input though. BTW I did crop reserve JM leg (on the original) as I was not happy with his white jump suit blending into the white sky. Good suggestion!

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Poster is cool. Would be cooler if I was in it ;)


yeah, Steve, I agree with Bigun, would be cooler w/ me in it!
If ya ever need to make a poster with us super tall skydivers at the dz, put me and Keith and Anthony in it! :P


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Tandem Cypres had to be shipped to the manufacturer after being outside the parameters during its four year check... but I don't need no tandems to skydive!!
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i think to a whuffo skydiving sounds expensive..how about putting in a price range just to give people an idea that you can actually afford to do this. Looks great though:)



[beginning] skydiving IS expensive! Too many prices and variables for a poster (video, stills, AFF, tandem, IAD, different AFF prices on each levvel, yada, yada, yada) -- that's why the website address is prominant.

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gee thanks Steve, that would be awesome. I'm gonna jump tomorrow, but next sat. I'll be at home for a week. Then when I get back we can do my air shots. You rock Steve!
No wonder they call you the rock! :P
cant wait to see the posters


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