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Have you ever seen a post and though-that's not right, but I don't want to drag the thread off topic so I'll let it slide. Well, here's your chance. Copy the post to this thread and fix it. The format is Original Post/Corrected Version. If you want to mention what thread it's from, that's fine but you don't have to.
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used to get me sick during aff..

and now i'm getting all excited, breath in deeply, and know, i'm gonna roll soon!

always loved the sound of a turbine before that tough!



Used to get me sick during AFF.

Now I'm getting all excited, breathe in deeply, and know I'm gonna roll soon!

Always loved the sound of a turbine before that, though!
Spirits fly on dangerous missions
Imaginations on fire

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Have you ever seen a postright and though-that's not righta post, but I don't want to drag the threadtopic off topicby a thread so I'll let it slide.drag. Well, here's your chance your chance is here. CopyPlagiarise the post to this threadsh*t and fix it f**k it up. The format is Original Post/Corrected Version whatever you want. If you want to mention mock the poster and what thread it's from everything they've written, that's fine great but and you don't have to must.



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So I try and I scream and I beg and I sigh
Just to prove I'm alive, and it's alright
'Cause tonight there's a way I'll make light of my treacherous life
Make light!

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Used to get me sick during AFF. This is not a sentence only a fragment.

Now I'm getting all excited, breathe in deeply, and know I'm gonna roll soon! "gonna" is not a real English word:P


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Chivalry is not dead; it only sleeps for want of work to do. - Jerome K Jerome

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Used to get me sick during AFF. This is not a sentence only a fragment.

Now I'm getting all excited, breathe in deeply, and know I'm gonna roll soon! "gonna" is not a real English word:P



I was correcting errors but allowing for stylistic highlights. Fragments are used commonly in writing, particularly in features.

poetic license: deviation from fact, form or rule, by an artist or writer, for the sake of the effect gained
Spirits fly on dangerous missions
Imaginations on fire

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Have you ever seen a post and though-that's not right, but I don't want to drag the thread off topic so I'll let it slide. Well, here's your chance. Copy the post to this thread and fix it. The format is Original Post/Corrected Version. If you want to mention what thread it's from, that's fine but you don't have to.



Well as you have never seen a post THEN thought, I assume you meant to type thought instead of though, it is a mute point.:)
I'm not usually into the whole 3-way thing, but you got me a little excited with that. - Skymama
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